You are not in my class but no one in my group did their homework.
So I looked at yours because it says you are a good model and you are in the green roof group.
What I enjoyed reading about your post was how detailed you were describing how your friend look when she was sick. “Her throat is swollen at both sides her glands press through like someone punching out ward from inside her neck. Her breath stinks of rot and medicine. Her hair is a mess, she’s sweating constantly." The way you wrote this part as though it was from a book or a movie, you can tell this a was present. This made me want to read more about your friend.
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