Hw 37

To Ben:

I think you did a good job expla,ing your mothers birth experiance and aswell describing how your father felt through the pregnacey. What caught my attention was when you explaing that your father took notes.during the whole thing and they took birthing classes."Througout a large part of the nine month period, my father took notes during my mother's pregnancy as well as in the classes they took on the Bradley method" From this shows that your parents, were on the same level of thinking on having a child and becoming prepared. This also made think about how much pregancey goes well when two people are involved and not just the women dealing with the whole thing. This is probably why your mother felt fine through your birth. I think something that could have been cool if you could have recored your mom talking and your dad. or took a picture of the notes he took. Overall this was a great post.

To Wille:

Im not sure who you interveiwed, which made the blog post  unclear. I did like the part where you mentioned, "Then i would take long walks to help my body get stronger. I also rubbed and talked to my stomach" because it explains that the person you interviwed was careful on how they took care of the baby. I think next time you should mentioned the persons name and put a little bit more depth, because I noticed you just kept repeating yourself. Hope next post is depthful.